the crazy dad

it’s twelve o’clock were going to miss a plane, quick get in the car “yes” said the rest of the family half an hour later they were at the aport “excuse me sear can I check your passport” he asked. “yes you can” said the dad. ” you’re good to go sear” said the police officer.  “good we got into are plane to Australia now we can relax” five hours later. “were finely we got to Australia” tired said the dad “hay dad can we have a nap” said  little girl so they walked to there hotel and went to bed.

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  1. Hi Zara I like your writing but there are a few missed spelt words like sir, finally, . I can see the first dad wavers which were estimation of time in the first sentence and the second one was action but other than that all the rest is good.

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